If you want your writing to be polished, professional, and effective, you’ll need to develop a system for reviewing your work with a critical eye. Here are some concrete steps you can take to vastly improve the results.
1: Put some distance between you and your work
2: Read like a reader, not like an editor
3: Limit your first edit
4: Now, you can edit
5: Perform a line edit
6: Take it apart
7: Return to the outline
8: Read it aloud
9: Remove emphasis, unless you really mean it
10: Run a spell check
11: Know yourself
12: Know your goal
13: Edit other people’s work
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1. Avoid a lot of back story
2. Simplify your sentences wherever possible.
3. Avoid adverbs for the most part.
4. Avoid using the same word over and over in a paragraph.
5. Don't overuse names.
6. Limit the description in a dialogue tag.
7. Avoid participle phrases
8. No idle chit-chat.
9. Minimize use of the passive voice.
10. Use active, descriptive verbs.
11. Minimize use of the verb "to be" to keep the word count down.
12. Cut the verb preceding an infinitive if it's not needed.
13. Avoid using the word that when you don't need it.
14. Watch for pet words or phrases you tend to favor without even realizing it.
15. Avoid stall phrases that slow down the action for no good reason.
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1. Give Yourself Some Space
2. Read in a Different Format
3. Use a Style Guide
4. Read Your Draft Out Loud
5. Balance the Whole
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